There's a demon in all of us.
A story of two men.
Of redemption, and belonging.
I think in this new version you've definitely developed Daehyun's character a lot more. There's more depth to him and the details all ads up. He's not the jerk he appears to be and he's just more human now.
I love the way you deal with scenes like these. Personally I don't like graphic sex. I love how you're very delicate with your wording. It's just elegant.
I realize you changed the story bcuz the first chapter is a little bit different than the old one but itz better ^^ hope to see the new update with other interesting thing. Thank you ^^
I don't know why but I just love this description. Silk drapes on a bedframe is so sexy asdghkl
Begin to post??
And because i already write the comment for this chap on aff, i won't write it again here..
I will just say..
You are awesome..
Update again soon please..
I think this part pretty much sums up Daehyun's dynamic characterization. I love it.