The Albino Series: Book 1 Fire in the Eyes

The Albino Series: Book 1 Fire in the Eyes

17 Part Story 3.3K Reads 79 Votes
Chi-Chan By GreenGum Updated Jan 28, 2012

I felt my dad drag me back. I felt the thoughts about him murdering my friends. I felt branches scratch my bandaged ankles. I struggled landing and kicked I finally landed on the groin, but he didn't even flinch. When he stopped, he pulled out his knife, I gulped when I saw the light reflect on the moon light. He slowly dragged it across my wrists. Blood oozed out, I cried in agony. "I would have gone easy on you, but you leave me no choice", My dad spat.

cometdust cometdust Dec 29, 2012 11:05PM
I love albinos! ^^ 
                                    I want to adopt one some day. (: 
                                    Name her Shiro, like Deadman Wonderland's Shiro. :D
GreenGum GreenGum Jan 11, 2012 01:14AM
please read comment vote the more you do the more I will upload!
jilguera jilguera Jan 07, 2012 11:00PM
Wow interesting start, I love the fresh character, an albino thats really cool!
GreenGum GreenGum Jan 04, 2012 12:08AM
Okay I changed my user name from AllyLinton to GreenGum when you look me up
                                    I will not show under AllyLinton
Rearea1998 Rearea1998 Jan 02, 2012 09:44PM
I like this idea and story line. I'm not really sure why her eyes are red. Was she born that way or is she a supernatural creature. Anywayss I hope things become more clearer in the new chapter. Oh and clechay is spet cliche anywayss I liked the idea and am moving onto the next chapter
Musiq4lyf Musiq4lyf Jan 02, 2012 03:23AM
LOVE how you described her being an Albino. People don't usually write about Albinos even though they are around in our world as well. This was a great start. You had one spelling error. It's cliche not cleshay. Other than that, this was really suspenseful and amazing. VOTED.