The Albino Series: Book 1 Fire in the Eyes

The Albino Series: Book 1 Fire in the Eyes

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Chi-Chan By GreenGum Updated Jan 28, 2012

I felt my dad drag me back. I felt the thoughts about him murdering my friends. I felt branches scratch my bandaged ankles. I struggled landing and kicked I finally landed on the groin, but he didn't even flinch. When he stopped, he pulled out his knife, I gulped when I saw the light reflect on the moon light. He slowly dragged it across my wrists. Blood oozed out, I cried in agony. "I would have gone easy on you, but you leave me no choice", My dad spat.

bpd-naota bpd-naota Dec 29, 2012
I love albinos! ^^ 
                              I want to adopt one some day. (: 
                              Name her Shiro, like Deadman Wonderland's Shiro. :D
GreenGum GreenGum Jan 11, 2012
please read comment vote the more you do the more I will upload!
jilguera jilguera Jan 07, 2012
Wow interesting start, I love the fresh character, an albino thats really cool!
GreenGum GreenGum Jan 04, 2012
Okay I changed my user name from AllyLinton to GreenGum when you look me up
                              I will not show under AllyLinton
Rearea1998 Rearea1998 Jan 02, 2012
I like this idea and story line. I'm not really sure why her eyes are red. Was she born that way or is she a supernatural creature. Anywayss I hope things become more clearer in the new chapter. Oh and clechay is spet cliche anywayss I liked the idea and am moving onto the next chapter
Musiq4lyf Musiq4lyf Jan 02, 2012
LOVE how you described her being an Albino. People don't usually write about Albinos even though they are around in our world as well. This was a great start. You had one spelling error. It's cliche not cleshay. Other than that, this was really suspenseful and amazing. VOTED.