Perfect

Perfect

2.1K Reads 40 Votes 11 Part Story
Deann By shootingstars317 Updated Jan 18, 2011

Jethro High School is a playground for Macy Jenkins; The most wealthy, the most beautiful, by far the most popular. Everyone thinks her life is perfect, and Macy intends to keep it that way. But when Cameron Sanchez enrolls at Jethro and everyone in school, including the teachers, is dazzled by the new girl. Cameron is, inside and out, the most amazing and beautiful girl anyone has ever met. Jealousy takes over and Macy can feel her perfect image slipping. And as Macy's life is turned upside down, nothing is what it seems anymore and she has to wonder - How many secrets can one school have?

Livin4God Livin4God Jan 13, 2011
Good job! just a few minor mistakes but otherwise it was wonderful!!!
JackiHerdez JackiHerdez Jan 12, 2011
I honestly can't find anything majorly wrong with it XD few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing major. Keep up the great work!!
Manny_28 Manny_28 Jan 10, 2011
Macy just want to party and sophie pretty much trying to make macy like her.because truely macy is a good girl its just her cycle of friends she has that are bad but macy is seeking to be cool so she is willing to fit in.
Manny_28 Manny_28 Jan 10, 2011
I think she not use to new house but when she find some friends of her caliber its going to be the bomb.
tianajade tianajade Jan 08, 2011
Wow, great beginning; it makes the reader want to keep reading. I didn't find many grammar errors, which is great (: Keep it up. *Voted*!
JasminSchweizer JasminSchweizer Jan 07, 2011
Its very  deep and  makes me want to keep reading on and on and aon!!!!