Summer awaits for me!

Summer awaits for me!

382 Reads 5 Votes 4 Part Story
Cami By December34 Updated Jan 22, 2011

Paxton is your everday 17 year old girl. She lives in a rich town but isnt that rich. She breaks rules and gets in trouble. Finally her father had enough. He yells at her on a everyday basic. Time for change. He sends her off for the summer. Away from everything she loved and enters a camp of 5 other students. What her father didnt tell her is that her camp isnt for just everyone. This camp is for the bad kids across the state she lives in. What has her father gotten her into. Trouble or romance. She discovers many things about nature, friendships and new boy crushes. Maybe even love. Will it work out? Will she finally change her bad ways?

jarms07 jarms07 Jan 09, 2011
Hi, this is a really good start to the story. When I had one of mine reviewed, I was told that dialogue is very important for the flow of the story and you are doing that really well.
                              
                              Don't be disheartened and stop writing your story, keep it up and I am sure it will be amazing.