Loyal ( Ja'far X Reader)

Loyal ( Ja'far X Reader)

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catherine By 135cat Updated Jan 04, 2017

This is a Jafar fan fic that it is from the Anime MAGI if you know
Just have fun reading! 



  • anime
  • fantasy
  • fluff
  • jafar
  • jafarxreader
  • magi
  • magiandthekingdomofmagic
  • romance
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 11, 2017
Not a mistake. Its just that you don't need to put this in. When you put in '(y/n)' and so on, we know you are using another person to talk to the reader.
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 11, 2017
Nothing is wrong with this but another way to put it is "we walked back home"
                              ONLY A SUGGESTION, it doesn't really need to be changed.
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 09, 2017
If you have time I suggest changing it to Sindria, if that is what you were going to put it as.
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 11, 2017
Haha, i find it kind of nice to see a repeat but the word 'and' is used too much. 
                              Maybe put a comma instead for the first and? Or maybe switch the wording a little? "We let go of each other then I grabbed my rope darts and walked the streets of Sindria."
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 11, 2017
No need to write this every time. It can take up too much of your time and give you a bit of a cramp in your wrist writing so much. Just put (f/c) or something like that. Most of us completely understand that already.
LastDragons LastDragons Jun 11, 2017
Don't use 'is' the first time it kind of throws  off the sentence. Say 'are' after that you should put 'much' rather than 'it is'
                              "The streets of Sindria are so cool, much better than dark, gloomy Ballbad."