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Captain's girlfriend

Captain's girlfriend

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pineapplesgur By pineapplesgur Completed

"I Told your bitch Ass you were my good luck charm" 

Cleo & Ben, probably a very unlikely couple to begin with. The Cocky jock falling in love with the new black girl on the block that has more problems than she can keep up with? yeah right. but as they say, always expect the unexpected.

So I'm guessing nicknames are mostly used 4 this story cz once again I have no idea who she's tlkin abt wen she talk's... Its so god damn confusing
Why is this written/organised lyk this, I cant tell who the hell is sayin wat, its so confusing. Giving me a headache yo! Please organise ur writing better, thank u!
keke21 keke21 Feb 12
Great story!!! You should separate into paragraphs. Besides that I love it.