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Clair By dramaqueenCMP Updated Aug 10, 2011

Celeste was used to being a normal high school girl, well as normal as you can be with a mother in rehab, and a sister who clearly has something to hide. Maybe a room with locks and chains on it? Soon, she discovers powers she never knew she had, and a whole new world she feels compelled to figure out. When things take a turn for the worst, will she come out on top or fall prey to the evil working in her own heart?

ZzMyKissofLifezZ ZzMyKissofLifezZ Jan 06, 2011
Cute... but let me guess the figure is Sean? Am I right? I liked it I really did keep going... and I don't know if you want my opinion but I think you should make it seem like the figure is Sean and have a major twist in the end. That would make it totallly awesome! Keep going!
dramaqueenCMP dramaqueenCMP Jan 02, 2011
 Thank you so much for your comments. I really do appreciate them. The advice really helps, and now my confidence is boosted! :)