NEW: Introducing Tap. Addictive chat stories for your 📲 Now in 10 languages
The Fourth Gate

The Fourth Gate

643 Reads 36 Votes 3 Part Story
Brie By CreatingBalance_ Updated Dec 27, 2011


Keeva is a simple girl with a very complex life.

Orphaned as babies, Keeva and her cynical twin sister, Kali, have never experienced anything exciting. But after a horrific car accident, truths about the twins' live begin to unfold. 

Who are they?
What are they?

Ladii_C Ladii_C Sep 04, 2012
Cool prologue can't wait to keep reading and see what else you got up your sleeve.
CreatingBalance_ CreatingBalance_ Dec 27, 2011
                              I think you're right, i haven't mentioned her name. Sorry about that - i have so many versions of this chapter that i haven't noticed it. Sorry!
sincerelytara sincerelytara Dec 27, 2011
Kali sounds a little bit evil... Anyways the cliffhanger was not something I was expecting so good job. There were a couple errors, but nothing major. Overall good job! =]
sincerelytara sincerelytara Dec 27, 2011
I like your prologue. The diction was good, the sentence structure looked good, and the voice was stunning. It's original, and destroying heaven is a most interesting thing to be writing about. I'm reading it! =]
Magicstudy Magicstudy Dec 27, 2011
That is a very good prologue... It makes me want to keep on reading~but u need to have more explanations... for example, who is Satan? What is Nephilim? 
                              Very good though... Keep Writing :D
sweetsecrets sweetsecrets Dec 27, 2011
i LOVE the prologue. it really drew me into the story. i will read more in my spare time. :)