As someone who is weak for money, Mark has turned to illegal jobs to get what he wants. Killing, stealing, destroying; he'll take anything. Yet when his next offer states he had to kidnap an Irish man, he can't seem to finish the job off.
For your first, your really good!Advice? I'm still new too, but dont worry, your really good! I cant wait for more
Are you sure this is your first story? Because it's extremely good. (: