Unspoken

Unspoken

5.8K Reads 118 Votes 17 Part Story
Reenie By SerenaMiiyaLuvvy Updated Dec 29, 2011

With a rich and supportive family anyone would think Alisia Eve Wilson had a perfectly happy life. But the truth is she was never complete. The painful memory of her mothers exit haunts her dreams almost every-night since she was age 5. She finds it heard to trust and open up to people because she's to scared the will hurt or leave her. Just life her Ex Andre and her mother. So when she meets Tashan a hot boy 
she takes a gamble... Will she regret it? Will he make her life better or just bring unwanted pain? Things don't say perfect for long.. They both have Unspoken secrets and its not long before they're revealed.  Could these problems tear them apart or make them stronger?

SerenaMiiyaLuvvy SerenaMiiyaLuvvy Feb 21, 2011
Hiya @Hoots453 Thank You for your help :D 
                              And for voting :) I appreciate the help ..  And will do my best to edit it x
                              I'll read hide and seek  today x
SerenaMiiyaLuvvy SerenaMiiyaLuvvy Feb 20, 2011
@BookLover199 Thanks for reading it. And yh I agree this chapter need paragraphs because its probably giving a bad impression on the rest which are not like this at all. Thanks again though x
BookLover199 BookLover199 Feb 20, 2011
It's really interesting and creative idea. However I think you should make your story into smaller paragraphs rather then one big one. It would be easier to  read. 
SerenaMiiyaLuvvy SerenaMiiyaLuvvy Feb 20, 2011
@hahaizzy Thank u so much. :D
                              And Yeah I Always Forget About Paragraphs, Even In School.. So I'll Try To Remember To Do That. 
                              Thanks Agen x
hahaizzy hahaizzy Feb 20, 2011
You're in desperate need of paragraphs. Just use the 'enter' button for them. But other than that the other chapters are fantastic.
SerenaMiiyaLuvvy SerenaMiiyaLuvvy Jan 14, 2011
 @kandah-kay AWWWW KANDAH!!! Hii. ! Finally Yu Read It. 
                              Thanks Love. 
                              And Yh I Guess Yu Are Abit. Make Sure Yu Vote And Become A Fan. Love Yu Loads x