Rebirth

Rebirth

1.2K Reads 22 Votes 1 Part Story
jubie By cubierock11 Updated Jan 03, 2011

The ending is the beginning, and the beginning is the ending. What lies between the two is the death of Renelle Ventus, yet here commences a beautiful beginning of a princess, already trained in the game of survival. The rule is simple: be selfish. The compliance of the rule soon proves to be difficult as fate slowly untangles an ending of origins.

matari11 matari11 Jul 19, 2011
Beautifully written couldn't stop reading loving all the twists and turns of ren's journey.
cubierock11 cubierock11 Feb 06, 2011
@BeccaM16XoXo 
                              
                              Thank you! I hope you'll continue reading. Ahaha. :)
cubierock11 cubierock11 Feb 06, 2011
@tianajade 
                              
                              Thank you for your compliments. I haven't gotten to editing yet. I like to full edits when I'm finished the book, but I'll probably add more. Thanks again!
tianajade tianajade Feb 06, 2011
A really good beginning. Your writing is beautifully written, and it flows nicely. I like some of the descriptions, as well. I think there should have been more emotion though. This definitely has potential to be a great book! Great job and keep writing! :)
Angelina_np Angelina_np Jan 31, 2011
@cubierock11 Oh ok then.. If that was what you wanted to do,it's ok :)
                              I'll read more of course.. Those there were my first impressions of your story.. I have to read more to come to a further conclusion :)
cubierock11 cubierock11 Jan 23, 2011
@IAlone Thank you for your kind remarks. :) I hope you'll continue to read my story!