Outsider - On Hold

Outsider - On Hold

3.2K Reads 116 Votes 4 Part Story
ℎ●ℓℓⓎ By HollylLouisel94 Updated Mar 08, 2011

Imagine a World within ours. 
Authors write about Fantasy. 
They write about dream worlds and other illusionary realms besides our own. But do they believe what they’re writing is true?
To you it’s all just imaginary, but for me it’s real. 
Every night when I sleep I visit a world quite unlike our own. 
But this is not a normal dream.

RoyalAwesomeness RoyalAwesomeness Jul 28, 2015
GODDAMNIT, I absolutely LOVE your book covers! Where did you come up with it? How did you do it? They're incredible! I have goosebumps when I first saw them. They fit your stories well, which by the way, are awesome.
Ageus1 Ageus1 Jun 02, 2011
Interesting! You had a good lead in and made me want to read the next chapter to find out what happens! Only one thing. It's spelled pier. 
livexlaughxlovexo0 livexlaughxlovexo0 Mar 09, 2011
*clap clap clap!!* very very nice! i love how you describe everything so perfectly. grammar's good, no spelling errors, very interesting. overall, a great story! Im voting and putting this in my library as well! :)
HollylLouisel94 HollylLouisel94 Jan 08, 2011
@omicool @xXhopelessromanticXx @eyeofthebeholder hey, thanks for the advice! ive split it up a bit now :) x
eyeofthebeholder eyeofthebeholder Jan 08, 2011
@xXhopelessromanticXx I agree large paragraphs overwhelm readers, but it is really good once you get over that!
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Jan 08, 2011
Very nice! :) though there are a few grammatical errors and the absence of paragraphs makes it a bit harder to read but I'm really liking the story