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Dare to Fly

Dare to Fly

289 Reads 7 Votes 2 Part Story
Kiersten~ By Awakening Updated Jan 07, 2011

Rinzette, She's definitely not your average orphan. She's stubborn, creative, and most of all a dreamer. The only problem is she's broke. Things start to turn around for her when she runs into a thief named Nicolai. He takes her to their underground base. They want something. Somehow she's the only one that can help. When they give her an offer she can't refuse, she takes it in a heartbeat. Is it really work it though? Rinzette sure is about to find out.

juliaxxx juliaxxx Dec 19, 2011
Oooh she got mixed up with a gang of theives, something tells me this story is going to be interesting! ;) I love Nicholai so far, he seems like a really fun guy. I cant wait to read what will happen next, please upload! *voted*
juliaxxx juliaxxx Dec 19, 2011
The loaf of bread thing made me laugh! :D I love this story, especially the way you describe the sounds and smells and her surroundings! It seems so real :) *voted*
TheShadowGirl TheShadowGirl Jan 28, 2011
I like it, I am a little busy right now so i cant continue reading it, but i will soon! Its good enough to read the next chapter!
meggielovie2 meggielovie2 Jan 08, 2011
its good, you have nice vocab and grammer is good.  Its a good idea for a story :) nice job!
Yumestar Yumestar Jan 07, 2011
This is great!
                              I think, it's awesome how the main character is so lively :D