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The Boy on the Bus

The Boy on the Bus

1.3K Reads 55 Votes 17 Part Story
Jasmine Orchid By DaydreamJazzy Updated Jan 09

Mariah, a young aspiring journalist, takes the bus to work every day. A story comes to her as a young mysterious man riding the bus system, seemingly having no particular place to go. Who is he, and how will he shape her life later?

***COVER BY Sad_Masquerade

TheLaughingPanda TheLaughingPanda Sep 18, 2016
Sad way to end a chapter 😭 but all in all I think this story's great so far 😁😁😁
DebbieHopkins DebbieHopkins Oct 26, 2016
your formatting transferred to a block style here on wattpad, unless you wanted it that way. It's a little distracting, esp. with the dialogue. But I like the beginning--- rather a journal type of intro??? Nice.
halima101 halima101 Feb 20
Gilll the first chapter was great no jokes.. I should be a writer.. I like how u introduced ur character in this first chapter.. over all's guud job 😊😘☺
DebbieHopkins DebbieHopkins Oct 26, 2016
Really nice foreshadowing--- dropped just the bare minimum of hints. Good hooks!
CasperQuagmire CasperQuagmire Oct 07, 2016
Your book is fantastic!I'm really gloming on to it😊 Best of luck💟