The Boy on the Bus

The Boy on the Bus

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Jasmine Orchid By DaydreamJazzy Updated Nov 25

Mariah, a young aspiring journalist, takes the bus to work every day. A story comes to her as a young mysterious man riding the bus system, seemingly having no particular place to go. Who is he, and how will he shape her life later?

***COVER BY Sad_Masquerade

Sad way to end a chapter 😭 but all in all I think this story's great so far 😁😁😁
your formatting transferred to a block style here on wattpad, unless you wanted it that way. It's a little distracting, esp. with the dialogue. But I like the beginning--- rather a journal type of intro??? Nice.
Really nice foreshadowing--- dropped just the bare minimum of hints. Good hooks!
cojiro388 cojiro388 Oct 07
Your book is fantastic!I'm really gloming on to it😊 Best of luck💟