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Her Mask

Her Mask

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Cupcake By cupcakemastrz Updated May 23

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Lucas skimmed through the crowd, searching for her. He had caught but just a mere glimpse of her earlier that same evening. She was not of this kingdom, but she was exceptionally beautiful, even though she was wearing a mask. Her hair as dark as midnight complimented black dress she wore which was made of silk. Lucas pushed his way out of the denser area of the crowd. He felt it was absurd to find anyone at this busy masquerade ball. Young ladies tugged at the edges of his sleeves, wanting to dance with him, Prince Lucas; but he was focused on one thing only, finding the girl. He finally caught sight of her on the balcony, gazing into the moonlight. Making his way over to her, his heart started to quicken. Just as he was going to open the glass door, she jumped from the balcony.

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TasneemiBunny TasneemiBunny Oct 23, 2016
Your book is pretty good so far and I know that this might be a lot to ask for, but  I would really appreciate it if you read my book Mask.
HecticWritezz HecticWritezz Oct 02, 2016
Why is it that all of the good stories have no reads? You really have a way with words! Good job!