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Pen Your Pride


548 Reads 23 Votes 1 Part Story
Rosie By Aries2 Updated Jan 03, 2011

The year is 2032, 'OPERATION ANTICRAFT' an underwater military facility designed to experiment and create  cyborgs has been overrun by its creations. The cyborgs are able to infiltrate the human race, capturing and experimenting on their victims. Lieutenant Declan Hawthorne is captured but is rescued by a beautiful cyborg NG12 who claims to be able to help him stop the robots. But can Mankind place its trust on a member of its sworn enemy?

  • craft
  • machines
  • redemption
  • robots
  • sherman
  • war
RobertGoode RobertGoode Jul 30, 2013
We'll as for myself I would say this sounds like a story I would really enjoy. Of course I'm ex Navy and spent some years attached SUBPAC.
JoshuaVerryJerry JoshuaVerryJerry Oct 26, 2011
I like the introduction, its an exciting start. Keep writing! 
                              Also, this might be random i know but are you by any chance a fan of Clive Cussler's books?
NesQuick NesQuick Oct 17, 2011
Just from the introduction it sounds like the kind of book I like. I hope you keep writing it!
Aries2 Aries2 Jan 06, 2011
                              thanks. It's great you took time to read it.  :) 
Livin4God Livin4God Jan 06, 2011
This is a good beginning, i especially like the prologue :)  the dialogue was really good and well written, i don't remember if i found any spelling mistakes so that's good haha Good work!
Aries2 Aries2 Jan 05, 2011
                              glad to know you like scifi. Thank you for fanning. I really appreciate it. ;)