Then, and only then, was She gone [Short Story]

Then, and only then, was She gone [Short Story]

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Namaste. By YellowCottonHat Completed

A short story I wrote (if it can be called a short story..)! First one I've written and finished actually.. Basically about remembering people when they die or something.. :)

twistedanjie twistedanjie Oct 29, 2011
This is beautiful and well written.  I love how it's short but contains so much. It made me sad but in a good way. You're great. (:
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Jul 27, 2011
@cassandramx *Blush Thank you so much! :'D Lol what movie what it?? <3
cassandramx cassandramx Jul 27, 2011
Amazing! You just summed up some movie I watched in two pages beautifully. (:
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Jul 12, 2011
@RecklessAbandon Haha thank you! I was trying to make it a bit creepy I guess, I didn't think I achieved that but I'm glad you think so! :'{) xx
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Jul 12, 2011
@xXxGTFO AHh! Thank you so much :'D ANd I quite like that; "Oh my flying unicorn zombies!" 
                              Maybe I'll use it some time xD Heehh <3 <3 
                              
                              
ClaudiaDBeer ClaudiaDBeer Jul 01, 2011
Oh My Flying Unicorn Zombies... I got goosebumps reading this. I swear this storie should be more popular! AAAAAAHHHHH!!! I almost cried. Dammit. I love it <3