The Delusion of Utopia

The Delusion of Utopia

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Lets_Hi5 By Lets_Hi5 Updated Jan 29, 2011

Contessa Wilkens daughter to a Greek mythologist has agreed to go on a month long voyage in the Mediterranean Sea in search for the lost city of Atlantis- little do they know, they actually manage to "stumble" upon it. Adapting to this world she is given the chance whether to stay in the 'perfect' kingdom under the sea or go back to the surface. But little does she know how corruption is something that happens to the best of us....

photolifedarklover photolifedarklover Jan 17, 2011
If you have high hopes PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more. The review brung me in automatically to start reading. Im hoping you'll finish. Please!!! ^_^
Lets_Hi5 Lets_Hi5 Jan 07, 2011
@MuahahaX3 That's a common misconception. Atlantis was the idea of Plato but circulated around the Egyptians, so I hope to incorporate that.Thanks for reading, but I might not continue due to school, and other things. 
                              
MuahahaX3 MuahahaX3 Jan 05, 2011
I love Greek mythology, even though Atlantis wasn't really a part of it. XD I believe I'll enjoy this. =]
                              -Charlotte
nyasha nyasha Jan 04, 2011
THIS IS VERY AMAZING KEEP ON WRITING...if u need tips the only tip is to get an editor or read over your stories..you have some tenses wrong but even so it is utterly amazing..flaburgasted over here
Citrine93 Citrine93 Jan 03, 2011
This is a great beginning to what sounds to be an awesome story. You drew me in right at the start with the 'poem'.
ginger-silver20 ginger-silver20 Jan 03, 2011
I like this, it's really good! Personally I'd love to go on trip to the Mediterannean, lol. Anyway, you're a great writer!