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Broken •Jasper Hale Book 1•  Completed

Broken •Jasper Hale Book 1• Completed

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X_cookiess_x By X_cookiess_x Completed

Elizabeth Swan is Bella Swans twin sister
They are both complete opposites.
what happens when she catches a certain someone's eye?
Is she who she says she is?
Find out in broken.

That moved way too fast, what happens to character development ? What're more detailed in jaspers eyes ? It's only the first chapter and it's been nailed down to self harm (as a self harmer I relate but not over these situations) pretty early into the story. 
                              Sorry for criticising.
klsullivan0617 klsullivan0617 Dec 01, 2016
Emmett and Rosalie are the only couple in this story😂😂
SatanSpace SatanSpace Feb 16
You need to capitalize names. Sometimes you forget to do so. But I love this chapter. n.n *thumbs up*