A Secret to Hide

A Secret to Hide

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Tuala23 By Tuala23 Updated Jan 21, 2013

A Love meant to be? Or are there secrets to hide.

When Daniel Cross entered Melissa Valentines life, she never expected to get along with the man she just met, let alone have feelings for him. But as Melissa's feelings for Daniel begin to grow she wonders if he could be the guy for her, or if he's just another egotistic man with only one thing on his mind.

Daniel Cross is on holiday, Looking to sell the Inn he co owns. Until he meets Melissa Valentine, his feelings for her become more than just business. But little does Melissa know, Daniel has a secret...a big one... hes married!

MrLittleJeans MrLittleJeans Jun 20, 2012
Amazing! The wording is good and it set an image in my head too. Continue the good work. 
                              
                              	。◕‿◕。 Mr.LittleJeans
WriteDreamInspire91 WriteDreamInspire91 Oct 31, 2011
really nice! would you care to read mine? thanks! :) voted..
DillonAwesoomeHalder DillonAwesoomeHalder Jan 12, 2011
thiss is very very good! :)
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LittleMissSunshineee LittleMissSunshineee Jan 10, 2011
Hey this is great! Thanks for recommending it! Keep writing k? x
AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Jan 05, 2011
This is quite good... It needs touching up though...
                              
                              For example when someone new speaks, leave a line... it just makes it easier on the eyes :)
Stargaz3r Stargaz3r Jan 04, 2011
Amazing beginning, the horses were described very well :D Loved it :o)
                              I shall continue reading ;D