The way she makes me feel

The way she makes me feel

13.7K Reads 303 Votes 11 Part Story
Carlos Garcia By Ditto_MeisterCG Updated Nov 26, 2016

Hey guys/gals! So this is my first FanFiction. I've been wanting to do one for a while now & I finally have the courage to make one & post it! Let me know if you enjoyed it!

Ash has always had these weird feelings for Serena ever since he asked her to travel with him. It's now the journey back to Lumiose city, where Ash can compete in the Kalos league & Ash's feelings have grown even stronger. Will Ash be able to tell Serena his feelings? Or will things keep getting in the way?

  • amourshipping
  • ash
  • bonnie
  • clemont
  • satosere
  • serena
Jtblake Jtblake Mar 28
I can't blame her I'm having trouble putting ash's voice to that to
Animebest25 Animebest25 Oct 05, 2016
It was really nice , i loved it....... waiting for the next chapters...hope your other chapters would as awesome as this
LunaMiner LunaMiner Sep 18, 2016
GAHH YOU SERIOUS THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFIC YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE YOUR SO TALENTED
MisterLooneyTune MisterLooneyTune Sep 01, 2016
This story of yours is starting off to a strong start Carlos. Excellent work and leave us in a cliffhanger? Just how I do things. 👍👍👍
Jhonatany77 Jhonatany77 Sep 01, 2016
Noooooo the cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved your first chapter!!!! It was really good! Wayyyyy to excited for next chapter
MagicGazelle133 MagicGazelle133 Dec 18, 2016
Bonnie is like, the smartest out of all of them, because she IS THE MATCHMAKER! ALL HAIL MATCHMAKER BONNIE *bows anime style*