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The way she makes me feel

The way she makes me feel

10K Reads 240 Votes 11 Part Story
Carlos Garcia By Ditto_MeisterCG Updated Nov 26, 2016

Hey guys/gals! So this is my first FanFiction. I've been wanting to do one for a while now & I finally have the courage to make one & post it! Let me know if you enjoyed it!

Ash has always had these weird feelings for Serena ever since he asked her to travel with him. It's now the journey back to Lumiose city, where Ash can compete in the Kalos league & Ash's feelings have grown even stronger. Will Ash be able to tell Serena his feelings? Or will things keep getting in the way?

Ditto_MeisterCG Ditto_MeisterCG Nov 28, 2016
No, this was during the flashback at summer camp that I made up
MaxderDachs MaxderDachs Sep 06, 2016
Seriously this is one of the best storiers i've ever read.The writing and plot was on point,the POV's also were good,the only Problem I had with is how Bonnie reacts.I feel like she shouldnt be concerned because she knows how Ash feels
Animebest25 Animebest25 Oct 05, 2016
It was really nice , i loved it....... waiting for the next chapters...hope your other chapters would as awesome as this
LunaMiner LunaMiner Sep 18, 2016
GAHH YOU SERIOUS THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFIC YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE YOUR SO TALENTED
MisterLooneyTune MisterLooneyTune Sep 01, 2016
This story of yours is starting off to a strong start Carlos. Excellent work and leave us in a cliffhanger? Just how I do things. 👍👍👍
Jhonatany77 Jhonatany77 Sep 01, 2016
Noooooo the cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved your first chapter!!!! It was really good! Wayyyyy to excited for next chapter