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The Bond

The Bond

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Eden aka Black October By Ed-rom Updated Jun 14, 2011

1818 years ago, 4 children were born. These children, from the day they all turned 14 would split the earth. Sky, Sea, Earth and Undeworld. The parents sought for a way to stop this happening. Their power came from a united world. They split the children and until they joined again the youngest (and the only girl) would not turn 14. The childrens powers would not intiate in any form. Now fate will bring them together.

TinaCsquared TinaCsquared Mar 08, 2011
Hm. I don't usually go for Element stories but this one is interesting...nice work
Silver-Lining Silver-Lining Jan 30, 2011
This chapter is a little short but it's still interesting and keep you wanting more so good job on that :) 
Silver-Lining Silver-Lining Jan 28, 2011
Sounds like a really unique story!! try making your paragraphs a little shorter so they are easier to realy but apart from that I like it and I think it's awesome :) 
misscupiecakesxoxo misscupiecakesxoxo Jan 23, 2011
this is sooooooooo good i cant wait to read more i love the idea it's almost professional i love it keep writing :) x
elethewombat elethewombat Aug 20, 2010
s'goooood :D but you must upload more -.- its been to long my friend i mean what is it? like 2 weeks!!!!!!! AHHH anywayyyyy i know you have this all stashed up somewhere just waiting to post so hurry up :P