Inevitable Tomorrow

Inevitable Tomorrow

354 Reads 14 Votes 7 Part Story
Julia Elizabeth By jemginger Updated Jan 09, 2011

Alex is lost in a futuristic world where gunmen roam everywhere, and the earth has become a giant desert. Can one girl help change the deadly fates of countless innocents before her crazed hormones distract her from the task at hand?

devolution devolution Jan 07, 2011
The fear the lead character has really humanizes her and allows us readers to sympathize with her you did good.
jemginger jemginger Jan 06, 2011
@IrisDane What would you say if I told you I made those mistakes deliberately? Haha ;) thanks for giving me your honest opinion though.
jemginger jemginger Jan 06, 2011
@IrisDane What would you say if I told you I made those mistakes deliberately? Haha ;) thanks for giving me your honest opinion though.