No Children ALLOWED

No Children ALLOWED

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Joe Horton By Paraeeks Completed

"He isn't real, Bree."

Some people believes Halloween is day to trick-or treating. Others believe Halloween it's  a day when the Snacker feeds on the flesh of the young. 

There is something dangerous about the eerie abandoned house in the town of BrookStone. When six friends enter the infamous house on Halloween night, they're positive the cannibalistic creature doesn't exist, except for Haven. What they thought was an urban legend soon becomes their worst enemy and they quickly learn why no children are allowed. Will they make it out alive or will they be Snacker's midnight snack?

Credit to SheHopes for helping me with the summary.

  • creepy
  • eerie
  • halloween
  • monster
  • paraeeks
  • scary
  • snacker
  • tnthorrorcontest
I still love this story without the mistake and the punctuation.
Hi Pareeks, Took me some time to get here, but I took the time to read this a second time. Looking good!
AryanGupta7 AryanGupta7 Sep 29, 2016
There's only one thing for which I don't like the book! Everything's going too fast!! And yup! There are some punctuation mistakes, edit them soon.
AryanGupta7 AryanGupta7 Sep 08, 2016
Wow! It's first chapter and looks like climax!! It's interesting, brilliant and scarier!
AryanGupta7 AryanGupta7 Sep 29, 2016
There's only one thing for which I don't like the book! Everything's going too fast!! And yup! There are some punctuation mistakes, edit them soon.
Imagine-man Imagine-man Sep 10, 2016
You're very first book on here and your best. Glad it's back!