B.A.I.T: When world's collide

B.A.I.T: When world's collide

261 Reads 10 Votes 5 Part Story
ormz1294 By ormz1294 Updated Jan 07, 2011

war has just broke out, Alex is a member of a secret service called the British assassin intelligence team (BAIT) who been sent into American territory to  try and gain vital information that will help the British win the war, but Alex is not prepared for what he about to face, his own brother who he never knew existed, what will happen when these two collide?.......

GiovannieStorm GiovannieStorm Jan 05, 2011
Kind of scary to know two strong and powerful contries are at war with America O.O Cause I live in America :c
                              *Shivers*
                              *Runs screaming*
lilmoe97 lilmoe97 Jan 02, 2011
Its a good story! just work on not putting 'he said' into the quotation marks because it gets the reader confused.
Jessabellx Jessabellx Dec 31, 2010
First of all: I like how you started with the tv report! That was cool. 
                              It's pretty short.... but I like the last line. 
                              Makes you want to read more:) 
                              Oh and voted and fanned.