Did You Just Melt My Heart?

Did You Just Melt My Heart?

7.7K Reads 209 Votes 16 Part Story
Jane By wickedrocket Updated Nov 16, 2014

Shelly Anne Ranford is an Ice user who is studying at a specialized school, Creamy Fortress. She killed someone already but she has no idea about it. There were four guys inside the Creamy Fortress that was tasked to protect her but eventually fell in love with her. The Dark Prince, the Dragon, the Ex-Lover, and the Blond President. Who will melt the heart of the Ice Princess? Let your imagination run wild with Shells and her four knights.

xXTheBelieverXx xXTheBelieverXx Feb 07, 2012
Other than a few word choice issues in the very beginning, this was great. It really drew me in and the descriptions couldnt be any better ;D
BelezaPrincesa BelezaPrincesa Aug 10, 2011
Great descriptions!  You have just the right amount of them, you're not over doing it or  not doing enough:)
LittleMsRiRi LittleMsRiRi Aug 10, 2011
Wow gonna keep reading so interesting....! Amazing start fanning and voting
Alesia-x Alesia-x Aug 10, 2011
Great start, very gripping! Extremely detailed in places which is always a must for a story as unique as this! Overall good start!
MeepyM MeepyM Aug 08, 2011
That is just such a unique story I've voted and its well written keep up the good work
princessshree princessshree Jul 31, 2011
okay...... you described them with their eyes....
                              it's cool......:)