Discovering Myself

Discovering Myself

13.6K Reads 223 Votes 23 Part Story
Hailey Nadine By DancinPelicans Updated Aug 06, 2011

Okay. My name is Augustine Marie Hunter. My siblings and I were moved across this country to the SMALLEST town at the base of some mountains. You see, our parents were murdered for there involvement in some nasty FBI stuff. It doesn't help that my siblings and I are the latest scientific phenomenon since Angelina Jolie. We've been hinted, prosecuted and ridiculed for our shockingly bright purple eyes since the day we set foot in this world. However, next door to our pleasantly old fashioned new home live a group of the hottest guys, who happen to be involved in a lot more mysterious things then my own parents were. Somehow, though, that doesn't surprise me.

ymarocks ymarocks Jul 22, 2012
Your story is very good.
                              The descriptions were awesome and its well written. 
                              I like it. I enjoyed reading this Chapter!
                              Voted!
blakkRose blakkRose Aug 23, 2011
I like the voice that you use in your writing because it not only works to develop your charactors and setting, but it makes your story more interesting.
blakkRose blakkRose Aug 23, 2011
I definetly like the plot, even though im not usually too big on werewolf stories.
                              its diffrent and i think its cool how her family is supersticious. it has to have a great affect on her though so im curious to see what happens next
                              I like how you are so discriptive. keep it up
SmileyRiley SmileyRiley Jun 13, 2011
I <3 it!(: & in the book cover I am absolutely in love those cowboy boots! (:
tianajade tianajade Feb 05, 2011
I think it's a pretty good beginning. A few grammar errors here and there, but nothing too major I don't think. I like some of your descriptions, they're good (: This definitely has potential to be a good story! Great work :D