The  Prince's Return (A Prince Merlin AU )

The Prince's Return (A Prince Merlin AU )

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fefe anderson By FRDeian Updated Jan 02

A fallen kingdom.A lost Prince that had to flee his kingdom.A traitor that invaded his home and took over.The worst part was the invasion was on his birthday.What happens when 5 of his closest friends and knights comes into Camelot reaching out for help.Secrets will be revealed as A lost prince returns to his home. This is the return of Arathiel 's one and only true Prince. 


I DO NOT OWN MERLIN. ALL RIGHTS GOES TO BBC AND THE CREATORS.

I OWN ONLY THE NEW CHARACTERS.

craftybookworm25 craftybookworm25 Nov 11, 2016
Burden. It is one burden. It's like saying 'the Kings of all Kings' when there is only one main King.
craftybookworm25 craftybookworm25 Nov 11, 2016
Comma after 'mean' because he's fixing what he said. Like he's saying it more to himself and 'Merlin' to Merlin.
craftybookworm25 craftybookworm25 Oct 28, 2016
Put a period after 'King Prat' before 'as'. The sentence doesn't really make sense otherwise.
PennyPony100 PennyPony100 Nov 16, 2016
Well if he just said Birthday it would sound like he's reminding you that it's your birthday.
craftybookworm25 craftybookworm25 Oct 28, 2016
It would be dire. Do you have a beta or someone to look over your story for mistakes? Not trying to be mean. I just want the best for the story.
craftybookworm25 craftybookworm25 Oct 28, 2016
What's this sentence supposed to mean? Sorry not trying to be mean.