The  Prince's Return (A Prince Merlin AU )

The Prince's Return (A Prince Merlin AU )

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fefe anderson By FRDeian Updated Dec 04

A fallen kingdom.A lost Prince that had to flee his kingdom.A traitor that invaded his home and took over.The worst part was the invasion was on his birthday.What happens when 5 of his closest friends and knights comes into Camelot reaching out for help.Secrets will be revealed as A lost prince returns to his home. This is the return of Arathiel 's one and only true Prince. 


I DO NOT OWN MERLIN. ALL RIGHTS GOES TO BBC AND THE CREATORS.

I OWN ONLY THE NEW CHARACTERS.

Burden. It is one burden. It's like saying 'the Kings of all Kings' when there is only one main King.
Comma after 'mean' because he's fixing what he said. Like he's saying it more to himself and 'Merlin' to Merlin.
Put a period after 'King Prat' before 'as'. The sentence doesn't really make sense otherwise.
Well if he just said Birthday it would sound like he's reminding you that it's your birthday.
It would be dire. Do you have a beta or someone to look over your story for mistakes? Not trying to be mean. I just want the best for the story.
What's this sentence supposed to mean? Sorry not trying to be mean.