Summer

Summer

705 Reads 17 Votes 3 Part Story
Roslyn By Unbeknownst Updated Jan 09, 2011

A collection of 'his' and 'her' works, about their tragic summer love.

AliceGraivenille AliceGraivenille Jan 09, 2011
@Unbeknownst You kiddin' right?  How could I ever lose interest in such a great work. Already checked commented and voted. Keep the parts coming. ;)))
Unbeknownst Unbeknownst Jan 09, 2011
@JoannaNestoridi Well I hope you haven't yet lost interest in this poem and story-to-be, for I have uploaded the next part (: a memoir-of-sorts from the guy's point of view. Hope you enjoy it :D 
Unbeknownst Unbeknownst Dec 13, 2010
I was thinking of making a series of poems and short works for this, keeping with the storyline, but explaining both the girl's and the guy's feelings and perspectives. I don't know if I should go ahead with it though :/
gabbyalex gabbyalex Dec 12, 2010
Your play on words is awesome. . your descriptions and the flow of it is amazing. .  and then how u tied a story line into it also. great. voted.
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Bloominfire Bloominfire Dec 12, 2010
That was.....it left me speechless to say.....but it was great! Keep it up! (I mean the poetry)
Unbeknownst Unbeknownst Dec 12, 2010
@Kapowman LOL WTH You're the only type of person who would type the way you speak anyway.