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Alpha of doom

Alpha of doom

5.6M Reads 195K Votes 75 Part Story
K E E L Y By QueenKeely Completed

*Completed* Book 1 of the 'alpha' series
"In the end, the guy doesn't change for the girl, the girl is still broken and they don't end up together."

He was cold
He was tormented
He was cruel
He was ruthless
He was powerful 
He couldn't love 
He killed
He was the alpha of doom

She was fragile 
She was sweet
She was kind
She loved anyone 
She was broken
She was tortured
She was an omega

Pain. Pain was all I felt and knowing that I would be living with someone who causes pain, it hurt me even more.

"Y-you killed innocent children," he chuckles darkly.

"I did."

"You're a monster, I can't be with a monster. I'm not staying" he laughs humourlessly.

"You aren't leaving me. Even the Gods can't change the fact that you are mine, you will always be mine and no one else's. Forever."

"P-please don't hurt me if I stay," I stutter afraid and cower back.

I remember the look in his eyes when I first saw him,  they weren't loving, kind or anything. They were pools of emptiness, nothing but the cold truth.

"I'm not going to hurt you Lily," he says with the same emptiness look in his eyes.

"Y-yes you are."

"I'm known as a killer, ruthless, powerful, cruel, cold and rough. I've killed thousands and you've killed none, one thing I Luca Knight wouldn't do is hurt my own mate."

Well that's reassuring...

Highest rank: #1 in werewolf 25/12/16
Currently being edited whenever I can
Sequel is alpha of destruction
Amazing cover by; @INNOCENT9146

                              Yo iba a preguntar si alguien la estaba traduciendo 😢😓
WolfQueen07 WolfQueen07 Apr 14
I've seen way worse. Trust me compared to u there r a lot of others who just need to go back to primary for writing
No offence but in my opinion ppl who have been abused or tormented aren't whiny bc to be fair they would know that that would get them hurt even more... dont take that in a wrong way tho.
People have different opinions on their feelings if they're abused or not. Its not like we can decide for them.
Thediamondquinn Thediamondquinn 12 hours ago
Hah you know the show from dusk till dawn? Yeah it is a coincidence to me
BeeBreeLee BeeBreeLee Apr 25
Dont worry author i think whoever is stupid and retarded enough to waste their time writing hate messages arent worth the time and effort it takes to comment pack!!!!