My Boss is my Roommate ?

My Boss is my Roommate ?

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NishaZ By Nishaz Updated Dec 19, 2012

He grabbed my hand and pushed me against the wall.  " You are mine , I have the only right over you. If anyone tries to get close to you , I swear I will kill every one of them".

The only problem is that the story is so short and I really like the story , you're a good writer
3VET22 3VET22 Jul 10, 2013
pretty cool! short but cool....it'll be perfect if it were longer. :D
lexiares1234 lexiares1234 Jun 21, 2013
I don't think the beginning is crappy it's utterly bull....... Great lol see what I did there hahha anyway love the start :)
TheEraser TheEraser Feb 01, 2013
This is not even remotely good. Terribly written, no character depth at all, thoroughly predictable, dastardly grammar and more paragraphs are dedicated to describing the characters hotness rather than getting on with the damn story.
Nishaz Nishaz Jan 22, 2012
i know the plum lips desccription is kinda weird but I kinda find it funny. Hehehe . 
                              Thanks for all the comments !
Nishaz Nishaz Jan 08, 2012
Hey Guys ! Thanks for the comments . Appreciate it.  I will make it longer .