He grabbed my hand and pushed me against the wall. " You are mine , I have the only right over you. If anyone tries to get close to you , I swear I will kill every one of them".
pretty cool! short but cool....it'll be perfect if it were longer. :D
I don't think the beginning is crappy it's utterly bull....... Great lol see what I did there hahha anyway love the start :)
This is not even remotely good. Terribly written, no character depth at all, thoroughly predictable, dastardly grammar and more paragraphs are dedicated to describing the characters hotness rather than getting on with the damn story.
i know the plum lips desccription is kinda weird but I kinda find it funny. Hehehe .
Thanks for all the comments !
Hey Guys ! Thanks for the comments . Appreciate it. I will make it longer .
Hey everyone ! Thanks for reading my first chapter. Please comment . 3 Comments for the next chapter.