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Merfae (On Hold)

Merfae (On Hold)

3K Reads 45 Votes 9 Part Story
Kelly By Stylishful Updated Jan 21, 2011

Akala always hoped that she was something more. Something, that wasn't what she was now. Ordinary, boring, normal. But Akala has never been normal, not the least. Akala wasn't supposed to exist. She was the mix of a Mer and a Fae. In fact, she is the mix of the Mer heir to the throne - the princess, and the Fae soon to be king. There love was forbidden, but they were teenagers at the time and all the wanted was each other. Unforuntally real life got in the way and when Akala was born she was sent to the orphanage to be normal and never see the true beauty of the land, nor sea. 

But when the King and Queen die leaving there only heir Akala to the throne, Rebellions come forth and plan to murder Akala in cold blood. The sacred stone. The one thing that could kill Akala. Because Akala might be the one thing that could unite Mer and Fae together again, because right now - they're enemies. Will Akala decide to take her role and unite the two species that have been warring since the dawn of time? Or will she maybe take another path...

Stylishful Stylishful Feb 03, 2011
@Penguin014 And thanks for the advice! I love getting criticizes...I sound tacky! xD :)
MissBelikovTazzy MissBelikovTazzy Jan 21, 2011
Please Read wonderful and unique story  :-
NathanBaruta NathanBaruta Jan 11, 2011
Remember merfay's law
                              Sorry I couldn't resist
                              Heard this pun yet?
                              I read xanth so I know puns
Stylishful Stylishful Jan 03, 2011
@precybee Thanks! (giggles like the little girl I know i am :) )
Stylishful Stylishful Jan 03, 2011
@Penguin014 Yeah, I just really wanted to get on to the part where she arrives because thats where it really picks up :). Also for you being confused...basically shes an orphan and was adopted by a Mer and Fae to become the princess of either, or. :) Hope that helps
LTHughes LTHughes Jan 02, 2011
I like it but not to be mean or anything it kinda is going to fast. You should probly slow it down a little cuz I'm kinda confused.