When Single Riders Come Together

When Single Riders Come Together

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Wrangler Writer By hoofprintson02 Updated 6 days ago

Tylee Jackson lives on a 100,000 acre ranch, outside of Sundance, Texas, that she runs herself. She is very shy and gets social anxiety easily, her best friend, Becca, says it is because she only goes to town once a month. She visits Becca goes to the feed store, and stocks up on her groceries. At the age of twenty-one the male gender is not on her mind, unless of course it has four feet. 
  
  Dan Hargrove is the handsome cowboy that catches every girls eye. Although he has dated several he hasn't found the one that makes him melt into the sand. That is until he catches a glimpse of the success solo rancher. 
  
  Will the town match maker, that happens to be friends with both, figure out a way to bring the two together?

#756 in General Fiction 10/16 
  
  (Cover by @radiant_purity )

LeaMenezes LeaMenezes Oct 07
This sentence sounds incomplete, here is a suggestion. 
                              As the nearest school was in town, that two hour's away from the ranch.*
That's a good one @hoofprintson02 ... Good job .. You could make the prolouge a bit more lengthy .. But, all in all, its really a good start
LeaMenezes LeaMenezes Oct 07
Hi
                              You have a good plot running here. The characters are introduced but kind of left hanging. Also I found it a bit confusing because of the tense you used here. Few mistakes which can be editable. Good job overall :)