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When Single Riders Come Together

When Single Riders Come Together

19.7K Reads 1.3K Votes 29 Part Story
Wrangler Writer By hoofprintson02 Completed

Tylee Jackson lives on a 100,000 acre ranch, outside of Sundance, Texas, that she runs herself. She is very shy and gets social anxiety easily, her best friend, Becca, says it is because she only goes to town once a month. She visits Becca goes to the feed store, and stocks up on her groceries. At the age of twenty-one the male gender is not on her mind, unless of course it has four feet. 
  Dan Hargrove is the handsome cowboy that catches every girls eye. Although he has dated several he hasn't found the one that makes him melt into the sand. That is until he catches a glimpse of the success solo rancher. 
  Will the town match maker, that happens to be friends with both, figure out a way to bring the two together?

#306 in General Fiction 1/2017
  (Cover by @radiant_purity )

This is a pretty cool first chapter! I don't know much about horses, but I really like them. I think this chapter really highlighted who Tylee is as a person, and you have fantastic imagery! Great job!
I love the way you started this story as it already has some mystery behind it!
LeaMenezes LeaMenezes Oct 07, 2016
This sentence sounds incomplete, here is a suggestion. 
                              As the nearest school was in town, that two hour's away from the ranch.*
Wow I love the starting of this story! I don't know about horses all that much as well but I love little ponies lol
                              I love the descriptions!
Sim-AntinI Sim-AntinI Jan 23
impressive start & the descriptions of the work involved in the farm are so authentic!
Rose_Manal_Royalist Rose_Manal_Royalist Sep 20, 2016
That's a good one @hoofprintson02 ... Good job .. You could make the prolouge a bit more lengthy .. But, all in all, its really a good start