A normal person wouldn't have whole organisations hunting them down, a normal person wouldn't have wings sprouting from their back a normal person wouldn't have to run for their life. But I'm not normal... Or human.
So far it's like Maximum Ride. Just one thing (other than the grammar, which you mentioned): continuous. Otherwise, good!
I'm sorry but this story reads so much like maximum ride it is just a bit different enough but still closs.
You should correct your grammar and a couple spelling mistakes, but very good plot so far
u have such a beautiful cover looking forwarded to read this book!!:)
I dont think the entire story is here becouse it goes from her first night flight with her brother to a fight and granadeg king off :(
I am thinking of making this book a trilogy or just two books which ever I come up with but I have an idea for the next one already