A normal person wouldn't have whole organisations hunting them down, a normal person wouldn't have wings sprouting from their back a normal person wouldn't have to run for their life. But I'm not normal... Or human.
The winged person is a girl? I found this story in the boyxboy section...😐
I love it ! It do robes what's happening to ME... In my life...
Commas are needed. Badly. It would tremendously improve the story, making it way easier to read. Otherwise, this is great!
There are a bunch of commas missing in here and it's making it a lil hard to read I have to read some bits through a few times before I can understand sorry:)
I love it when the girls in books go all badass on guys, I mean their ego's are big enough and sexist much?! Love the book by the way.
I think she should have brought out her wings and said she was the Angel of death, and she could kill them easily if they didn't run along.