Grey

Grey

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Kaylee J By autumnskiess Completed

~~To Be Published~~ Grey: the metaphor of being in the in between of black and white. Everything is dim, colorless, miserable and plain. 
      
      Much like Elizabeth's life. But not her state of mind. Nothing could have prepared her for what was coming, and no one can save her from the biggest cult America has ever seen. The cult has claimed her, trapped her, brainwashed her and embedded her skin with scars. There is no way out. Once Cross Academy has chosen you, you leave your identity at the guarded gate and you step inside a mystery that has sent members mad from oppression. 
      
      Elizabeth joined as a defiant cult member. Now, she's a test subject. Her arrival, and intelligence, will change everything.
      
      Inspired by true events~~~~~ this is her story.
      
      @carolinekoroni - You have the makings of a great writer. Everything seemed so real, how you thought of such a plot I can't imagine.
      
      @nature_bliz - Oh, goodness. What a revelation! so much deception and lies. Indescribably brilliant.
      
      @AnnabelleReid - This was an incredible read. I got through it in a day (which is usually difficult for me) but this was one of the best books I've ever read! 
      
      @Flavicomus - I have to say, this was an amazing book! A fast-paced, well-written story of a lovable character that I couldn't put down (or click out of, I should say) 
      
      @FriendsWithDarkness - That explains everything. OK This was a twist I so didn't expect. I love this book. The best thing about your book is that it's so damn interesting that you dont wanna put it down, like I've been up all night, desperate to finish this book
      
      @Beatific21 - Heart-wrenching. 
      
      Highest Rank: #24 in mystery/thriller.
      
      If you can't handle a thriller story that isn't about predictable deaths, detectives or obsessive stalkers, then this book isn't for you. It's different. Consider yourself warned.

I love that quote. And oh my god you're cast seems perfect. Jenna looks like the innocent type and Christoph is so menacing I'm gonna assume he is the cult leader
Jey_Nathan Jey_Nathan Apr 21
Awesome
                              You're right about mystery and triller being about murders tho
- - Jan 04
Yes. Very long note indeed. Makes one wonder about this cases in real life.
JettaFrame JettaFrame Sep 05, 2016
Also, the blurb. I recommend including an excerpt from your book that is haunting, and a shorter idea of the themes in your book. Being blatantly honest, the first three paragraphs of the blurb held my interest, and then after that I started drifting off. Recommend shorter
I can alread feel this is going to be intresting, I have little knowledge of these things so both educational and eye opening. Glad you warn the reader what they are in for.
november111971 november111971 Dec 16, 2016
What is your full writers name please so I can read your other stories.