So it's simple I'm in love with my best friends sister and nothing can change that
Sooo tiring to read it. And only one paragraph. How old are you?
No one POV I think you should not put anything there cuz that's the narrator
Nothing calmer than someone screaming " get the f****** you can't be late Mom would f****** kill me"
QURL USE PUNCTUATION.. some ppl read aloud (aka mahself) and now I'm outta breath
That concert in which Lauren tells her number ......"5-5-5 NO! "😂
This is very good! One thing you could add would be to put in punctuation. But I love the plot. Good job!👍☺️