So it's simple I'm in love with my best friends sister and nothing can change that
Sooo tiring to read it. And only one paragraph. How old are you?
No one POV I think you should not put anything there cuz that's the narrator
Nothing calmer than someone screaming " get the f****** you can't be late Mom would f****** kill me"
QURL USE PUNCTUATION.. some ppl read aloud (aka mahself) and now I'm outta breath
"Soo.. Jason wants Lauren's phone number.." *Camila gives Lauren a death glare* "555 - No!" *Camila smiles*
This is very good! One thing you could add would be to put in punctuation. But I love the plot. Good job!👍☺️