Supernatural//[ON HOLD]

Supernatural//[ON HOLD]

35.6K Reads 608 Votes 20 Part Story
xolilyxo By xolilyxo Updated Aug 28, 2011

Jamie Kyle doesn't believe in werewolves and vampires. But when her crush and next door neighbor turns out to be a creature straight out of her fantasy books, she has a hard time accepting the truth. But once she does, her world is thrown into chaos. A war is waging and she's the prize. Can she really stop history from repeating itself? Or will a tragic story of a deceased young girl become her own?

SavyJParker SavyJParker Mar 23, 2011
I'm not very into werewolves, but you do have a really good style of writing. 
treehugger11 treehugger11 Feb 28, 2011
I like how you add lots of discriptive words but you should go over it again there are some mistakes and some of your words are used in the wrong context. :)
Jemn1611 Jemn1611 Jan 20, 2011
really liked this first chapter, looking forward to reading more :)
Chantie95xo Chantie95xo Jan 16, 2011
You have very pecific detail and pay attention the little things that matter. You describe stuff well and have a really good introduction to the main character and her relationship with her family. Good starting.
rockethoran rockethoran Jan 05, 2011
@xolilyxo That's cool. Yeah I will. For sure. =D.
                              Thanks. That would be great. =D.
xolilyxo xolilyxo Jan 02, 2011
@ParaMoreButterFly Thanks! Would you mind recommending it to your peers? I'll check out your stories!