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When Breathing Gets You Killed

When Breathing Gets You Killed

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RoseGold By mRoseGoldsmith Updated 18 minutes ago

What if your world was taken over by mindless people who don't breathe? What if these people had the goal of making everyone who breathes like them? 
That is now reality.

Australia has been taken over, invaded by it's own people. Nobody knows what makes them this way, or why they are this way. We just know that the only clear difference between us and them is that they don't breathe and they don't think, If they find you, you're as good as dead, If You learn to control your breathing they can't find you, If You can get your breathing held in for over a minute You might stand a greater chance.
Breathing gets us killed but it also makes us human, will you breathe?


Contains reference, mention and/or descriptions of violence, religion, LGBT relationship, kidnapping, murder, sex, rape,  mental illness, self harm and suicide, etc. Nothing is intended to offend. 

Keep in mind, this is a first draft, so it's far from perfect. I plan to go through it over and over in the future and hopefully publish it as an actual book!
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Ellabyrinthia Ellabyrinthia 5 days ago
This book is really interesting! I was reading the description and I was like 'Oh!' ... first time to read a story without my nose bleeding. lol.
Wow! had a great time reading this. You are such a good writer. I can't wait to read the next part.
Ellabyrinthia Ellabyrinthia 5 days ago
oh! love the song too! using earphones and turning the volume to the fullest will make your goosebumps on lol
Just downloaded the song,its an amazing song. #the originals 😜
lailasweetcookie lailasweetcookie Dec 27, 2016
Sounds like a doctor who episode I would have been hella like Clara
SkyRynn SkyRynn Mar 04
Ooh. I love the suspense. Really nice writing. Smooth and easy to read.