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When Breathing Gets You Killed (Book 1)

When Breathing Gets You Killed (Book 1)

61.1K Reads 4.2K Votes 182 Part Story
RoseGold By mRoseGoldsmith Completed

What if your world was taken over by mindless people who don't breathe? What if these people had the goal of making everyone who breathes like them? 
That is now reality.

Australia has been taken over, invaded by it's own people. Nobody knows what makes them this way, or why they are this way. We just know that the only clear difference between us and them is that they don't breathe and they don't think, If they find you, you're as good as dead, If You learn to control your breathing they can't find you, If You can get your breathing held in for over a minute You might stand a greater chance.
Breathing gets us killed but it also makes us human, will you breathe?


Contains reference and/or descriptions of violence, religion, murder, sex, self harm and suicide, etc 

Keep in mind, this is a first draft, so it's far from perfect. I plan to go through it over and over in the future and hopefully publish it as an actual book!

science fiction ranking as of 
March 4:#4

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ShadyPlaysGames ShadyPlaysGames 3 days ago
Lol. Just know I meant no ill will and just tried to give you constructive critism. I hope you story gets popular. It has an amazing concept
lailasweetcookie lailasweetcookie Dec 27, 2016
Sounds like a doctor who episode I would have been hella like Clara
RynnWriter RynnWriter Mar 04
Ooh. I love the suspense. Really nice writing. Smooth and easy to read.
This sounds like a horror - reading cause the title is interesting and I adore horror
canjana canjana Oct 08, 2016
May be after a month,reading again!!& it's thrilling with the same space.
This should be names breathe or breathless with the breath in a different color then the less