When Breathing Gets You Killed  {On Going}

When Breathing Gets You Killed {On Going}

8.6K Reads 896 Votes 81 Part Story
RoseGold By mRoseGoldsmith Updated 5 hours ago

What if your world was taken over by mindless people who don't breathe? What if these people had the goal of making everyone who breathes like them? 
Well that, that is reality now.


Australia has been taken over, invaded by it's own people. Nobody knows what makes them this way, or why they are this way. We just know that the only clear difference between us and them is that they don't breathe and they don't think, If they find you you're as good as dead, If You learn to control your breathing they can't find you, If You can get your breathing held in for over a minute You might stand a greater chance.
Breathing gets us killed but it also makes us human, will you breath?


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Publishing daily (twice on Saturdays)

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Contains reference and/or descriptions of violence, murder, sex, and suicide, etc 
 
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"When breathing gets you killed" is slowly but steadily gaining popularity! You have no clue how excited I am! I appreciate everyone who's taken the time to read my story
1k views in less then a month! I'm freaking out!

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Please remember to give all the parts you enjoyed a vote, I really appreciate knowing which ones you guys like best, it will help my writing style in the future. 


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science fiction ranking as of 
November 24:#18
(Nov 23: #22, Nov 22: #24 Nov 7: #25 Oct 16: #30, Oct14: #36, Oct 10: #37, Oct4: #39, Oct2: #43, Sept30: #49 Sept28: #52, Sept25: #54 sept 21: #58, Sept 5: #105, sept4: #117, sept3: #181)

#Greatreads ranking as of
November 27: #3

I can't yet say... If they aren't zombies that means they have emotions beyond a simple primal instinct. So it's anyone's guess really.
canjana canjana Oct 08
May be after a month,reading again!!& it's thrilling with the same space.
Well you have all this nice people on here giving you great comments. It will be my duty to give you 100% feedback good or bad. I hope you are prepared
Add an extra space between your paragraphs and your future readers will thank you. It's a lot easier on the eyes for some reason
Still trying to picture them. Do they have nails like claws? Teeth like fangs? Breath like toxic gas? I know they have feet (because you said they do) and I know two other things, but beyond that I have no clue
Wow i was so drawn in to the detail and i felt almost as if i was there