Broken Walls... Broken Heart!

Broken Walls... Broken Heart!

37 Part Story 16.7K Reads 158 Votes
mimzy1 By mimzy1 Completed

Amie is Looking for love but finds all the guys she dates are all after one thing! Her previous relationship left her running and starting her life over again. None of her friends know her big secret.... Until one day the man she ran from finds her and wants her back he knows everything about her..... Can he use it against her??...... Will she get back with him?....

mimzy1 mimzy1 Mar 24, 2011 01:55AM
@trishthewriter Thanks! Its really good to get some constructive critism, This is my first time writting so im just playing with this right now but its good to know what not to do when i re write this and for other storys that i may write.
                              
                              Thanks again! xx
mimzy1 mimzy1 Mar 03, 2011 01:46AM
@Written_Blue_Prints Thank you for reading :) I Hope you enjoy the rest when i upload! :)
                              @HeatherMcCorkle Thank you soo much I really do appreciate your comment it truly made my day thanks! Ill try read your work later on today right now tho my bed is calling me hehehe!
                              Thanks again xx
LOved it !!!
                              Really good cant wait to continue reading the rest
mimzy1 mimzy1 Mar 01, 2011 12:17AM
@Buddie Thank You! My first bit of Critism :) Yeah the exclamation marks i do agree i use them alot, feel like it gets my point across n blah blah lol I'll try to ease up on them. Thank you for reading x
mimzy1 mimzy1 Feb 27, 2011 09:38PM
@blueeyestobe Thank You! And Yeah pof.com is a real site lol! x
blueeyestobe blueeyestobe Feb 27, 2011 09:35PM
(: Good story!! Is Pof.com a real site? XD If not, it made me believe it was(: