Percabeth in Sanfrancisco

Percabeth in Sanfrancisco

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Hazel_Levesque15 By Hazel_Levesque15 Updated Oct 11, 2016

I basically didn't think that there were enough stories about Percy going to see Annabeth in California so I made one up. 
        
        Percy goes to stay with Annabeth in California and goes to school with her and such. The story includes Dr. Chase, Helen, Bobby, Matthew, and our very own Percabeth. Set after BoO (with a couple of my own twists). Brand new story.  OC are called  Lilly,  Alivia, Hayden, Caedyn, Oliver, Katie, and Drew. Ok bye!

  • annabeth
  • california
  • cliche
  • fanfiction
  • hoo
  • percabeth
  • percy
  • pjo
- - Apr 08, 2017
The grammar mistakes, oh, god! Search up grammar check on Google.
imxnotxnormal imxnotxnormal Jun 21, 2017
He could have just swung his sword. It would not hurt a mortal.
- - Apr 08, 2017
Proper nouns need to be capitalized. Seriously? Am I supposed to be giving a 4th grade language arts lesson?
This paragraph has so many typos, incorrect punctuation and grammar that I’m practically crying from my OCD acting up. I’m not trying to be a hater, but you seriously need a beta writer, or to start editing your work. I’d even volunteer, if I thought you’d take me up on it.
Fluffyishappy221 Fluffyishappy221 Dec 30, 2017
F-fu-aking don't remember what day it is on August 18?! 
                              
                              
                              Im DyInG.
- - Apr 08, 2017
No spaces before the "Ok"; the start of a sentence needs to be capitalized.