You're a Dork- Clexa College AU

You're a Dork- Clexa College AU

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Lara By LiteraryCoping Updated Jan 09

Lexa and Clarke had gotten along like wildfire from the moment they met. And they continue to go out, get to know each other and do everything couples do- except, neither of them really make it official, and for a while they are stuck in that place between friends, and something more. 
  
  But when they do finally get together, and a life changing event occurs, resulting in some regrettable mistakes, will they be able to move on? And will they be able to forgive each other?

FluffyPinks FluffyPinks Sep 19, 2016
Okay I really feel bad for all the corrections, but I don't know if you want to know about them? Most of them aren't noticeable, but you forgot to put the period here.
Nephilim_Riptide75 Nephilim_Riptide75 Sep 19, 2016
214... Hmmm. Maybe a reference to 2.14 when the first Clexa kiss happened?
FluffyPinks FluffyPinks Sep 19, 2016
Wow she's pretty smooth lmao. I feel like she's saying these in a really seductive tone, but probably not.
FluffyPinks FluffyPinks Sep 19, 2016
Ahhh, I'm really sorry for all the grammar corrections, but you have a verb disagreement. You would have to say: At the table was a warm smiling, olive skinned man with grey hair, speaking to students.
FluffyPinks FluffyPinks Sep 19, 2016
You don't need a question mark here, just a period or a comma. (Okay, I'm going to stop now because I feel obnoxious for doing this)
FluffyPinks FluffyPinks Sep 19, 2016
Okay so just a quick tip for dialogue, when someone is just speaking (it's good that you didn't put a period, though) you'll usually put a comma after it. Like: "John, we're going to the movies tonight,"