my love is not for a thug

my love is not for a thug

187K Reads 5.6K Votes 26 Part Story
M.p. Mitchell By MpMitchell Completed

there a girl name deanna who trying to follow her father wishes and dont fall in love with a thug like him  also there a guy name adrian who trying to follow the number one rule of being a thug dont fall in love!

  • coma
  • confusedgirl
  • love
  • thugboy
  • urban
Mjone6205 Mjone6205 Mar 10, 2017
It's not Mexican if you wasn't born in Mexico it's Hispanic. I hate when people write it like that
KissesByKae KissesByKae Feb 07
Oh no mam how yu take cold showers my water gotta be hotter then the devil's ball sack
KissesByKae KissesByKae Feb 07
How yu start runnin ya mouth n walk ya scary ass away when she clap back lol
LiraBrown LiraBrown Dec 20, 2016
Word of advice, never ever start a story with describing the physical features of characters we haven't been introduced to. It's a giant turn off to new readers, and has no relevance to the plot.
                              
                              Also, don't just randomly switch points of views without letting people know. It's really confusing.
selfmade_keshia selfmade_keshia Nov 28, 2015
Do u ever use periods when u writing? I'm not being rude it just confuse me a lil cause idk where the sentences end but nice book!❣