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my love is not for a thug

my love is not for a thug

160K Reads 4.6K Votes 26 Part Story
M.p. Mitchell By MpMitchell Completed

there a girl name deanna who trying to follow her father wishes and dont fall in love with a thug like him  also there a guy name adrian who trying to follow the number one rule of being a thug dont fall in love!

LiraBrown LiraBrown Dec 20, 2016
Word of advice, never ever start a story with describing the physical features of characters we haven't been introduced to. It's a giant turn off to new readers, and has no relevance to the plot.
                              
                              Also, don't just randomly switch points of views without letting people know. It's really confusing.
selfmade_keshia selfmade_keshia Nov 28, 2015
Do u ever use periods when u writing? I'm not being rude it just confuse me a lil cause idk where the sentences end but nice book!❣