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Saving Him

Saving Him

325K Reads 17.1K Votes 107 Part Story
ClariceGrimes By ClariceGrimes Updated Mar 13

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"Leave."

It was weak and held no demand. Irritation, filled me giving some strength to continue looking a those eyes defiantly, but i could not move. If i tried i might run right into those warm safe arms that beckoned me. This was all wrong though. He must be casting some spell, or power over me. I've never flocked over anyone before. Here this total stranger stood, making my body tremble with sexual need. 

"Is that really what you want?" 

His eyes looked at me, with dark humor. He knew what effect he was having on me. His nose seemed to flare when my fluttering grew, and that smirk did too. 

"Yes." I said. My body screamed 'no'.

*****


Elizabeth is just trying to pay rent, but her past keeps on huanting her. What happens when some bad guys come for her? Will they kill her for her sharp tongue and bad attitude, or let her live with the horrible mess they leave her life in? 
   All hopes seems lost till she bumps heads with the possessive vampire that in exchange of saving her from imprisonment gives her another life b ut to Elizabeth it's just another cage. 
   Read to find out how she fights through these struggles in the world of supernatural, and fight tooth and nail with the one that she will have to save. 

( Recommend 18+) I will make special chapter's for those that don't want to read the graphic chapters.

 COVER made by @VioletPurple)

mtd1109 mtd1109 Mar 15
"... nightmares came showed" doesn't make sense. Also, it's "pale" and "whether"
Wow! That was such an amazing start!  It really pulled me in!
That has got the best beginning I have ever read in my life 👏👏
I_Byte I_Byte Jan 27
Don't need a semicolon after I... or a comma after bed and that whole sentence is a run on ha ha
I_Byte I_Byte Jan 27
No comma after bed. Only a comma after and if part before and makes a sentence and the part after also makes a sentence. No fragments!
inkheart4 inkheart4 Feb 28
Oh my this is the best beginning I've ever seen so far 😍👏