My Bad Boy Severus Snape

My Bad Boy Severus Snape

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Jack Tpk By Jack-tpk09 Completed

Dumbledore haven given Hermione and Severus a job in Hermione's 4th year and now it war she has to decide to be with Severus or Harry
In the beginning they didn't like it
but they worked things out
and now a war has started Severus want her to be safe she want him to be safe
and he almost dying wasn't working so now she has to decide to stay with Harry or be with Severus and the deatheaters

(Started August 20, 2016
Finished December 12, 2016
Started editing *for real* August 21, 2017
Finished editing August 29, 2017!)

  • draco
  • dumbledore
  • granger
  • harry
  • hermione
  • hogwarts
  • malfoy
  • nevillelongbottom
  • potter
  • ronald
  • ronweasley
  • severus
  • sevmione
  • snape
  • sshg
  • weasley
I really like the idea of this book but I think it needs to be edited more before I can really enjoy it. Personally for me the bad grammar and unfinished sentences are ruining it for me. Like I said before, my offer still stands to be your personal editor. Just message me if your interested.
I totally agree! I'll help if you want it aswell. This book is hard to follow with the sentence structures, grammar mistakes and the missing words. But good story line so far. 😁
I know this is kinda of a stupid question, but are you a dude? I ask because I've never heard of a male SSGH fan. At least not until now. And I would get it if your not male either since Jack is a unisex name. So please don't be offended. I was just curious.
Jack-tpk09 Jack-tpk09 Jul 02
I'm so sorry , I'm working on this one as we speak so I'm going back and fixing it 
                              I probably should of had this done a long time ago but I don't have the time
                              And no I started this story when I was 15 so two years ago 
                              I had no one to correct my grammar until now
This is a really great book but it needs some editing. Would you like me to do that for you?
I agree with @Jack-tpk09  the grammar is very difficult to read. Is it possible you are either dislestic by any chance or from another country and aren't very good with the English language. I hope you understand I am not trying to be rude I am just curious