The Dorston Fall [Book I in the Dorston Legacy]

The Dorston Fall [Book I in the Dorston Legacy]

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Hannah By HannahMKing Completed

When King Richard is kidnapped on his return home from a five-year war, his daughter and heir, Katelyn is determined to rescue him from the clutches of the bandit force, The Justice. Leaving with her mother's blessing, Katelyn collects her wits and father's sword and begins her journey for the infamous, torture castle of Hellmore.

On her travels, she meets Sammy. A blacksmith's son, an adventurer with a quick mouth and a stubborn head. However reluctantly, Katelyn allows him to accompany her on her mission. Together they fight bandits, cave monsters, thieves and to both their surprise, their growing feelings for one another. 

But with her father's life on the line, Katelyn can't afford her judgement to be clouded. Her feelings aside, the Princess finds herself in unfamiliar territory, where every man is fighting for the Crown of Belran. Her father's crown. Her crown. 

To her heartache, Katelyn will learn the price of trusting the wrong people and that love & loyalty is a double sided sword.

Started: 10/09/2013
Completed: 13/08/2014

  • adventure
  • bandits
  • betrayal
  • blacksmith
  • fiction
  • loyalty
  • princess
  • ransom
  • romance
  • war
insipiredheart insipiredheart Feb 11, 2016
I only read the prolouge and I already know that these are the kind of books I spend hours searching for.
kingy16 kingy16 Apr 02, 2015
awesome beginning, very descriptive, however, had katlyn just given him the letter ? was that the task as it seemed to jump. but most excellent
circularities circularities Sep 05, 2014
Great cover and really amazing writing. Really interesting :) Good luck in the competition and it would be great if you could check out my entry too. Thanks :)
AlinaKG AlinaKG Aug 19, 2014
Really good chapter. You captured the emotions well, and your prose is extremely tidy, which is refreshing.
AlinaKG AlinaKG Aug 19, 2014
Nice addition, provide quite some comical relief from the tense mood.
HannahMKing HannahMKing May 20, 2014
@hollygal123 Thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this. Hope you continue this. Would love to hear what you think x