The beginning of this story starts from the episode Mr candle cares. Tom has big feelings for Marco, but can't seem to show them correctly!
I like how you made it like tom was gay I love gay fanfictions
I love the way you added gravityfalls into the story very interesting
Ex: looking up at the sky what I saw were covering the yellow star were packs of leaves. The tallest Tree in the world surely amazed me (but that's kinda bad example)
OMG thank you! You saying this means so much to me and you following me means alot too! It was my goal to get you to follow me XD your stories made me want to write! now I can have a great 1st day of school. :)
*drops phone on the ground like a mike* this story story just got hella good.
So far the first part is great very good I could read this forever