My master, or My lover (bdsm)

My master, or My lover (bdsm)

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Nia By lala_land_love Completed

Control series:book one

I had to pick between my master and my lover.

  • bdsm
  • broken
  • control
  • love
  • triangle
SmilingLexi SmilingLexi Apr 12
Not a fan of your writing style. Sheesh. I had to read sentences more than once to understand.
_Cupcake_xx _Cupcake_xx Feb 21, 2016
The way u write whos speaking is confusing but so far so good
PhoebeMichele PhoebeMichele Nov 06, 2014
I'm liking it. The only thing I would say is you don't have to say who's speaking everytime someone speaks. Other than that I'm really liking it