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Crimson Heart

Crimson Heart

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Lickerfish By Lickerfish Updated May 01

≃  "W-With 2 spirits trapped inside one body, only one will survive" ≃
- Victoria 

Have you ever felt like there is an eternal war raging within you?

Like there is two beings inside of you fighting against each other. Strangling all your thoughts. Love vs Hate. Good vs Bad. Who will survive?

 That's the exact same question for Rune Ambrosia, since that fateful incident her entire life is now marked by her new found sense of the harsh truth, Will she step up to the table and compete in these vampire tournaments, or will she fail losing everyone and everything she cares about?

Oh my goodness, this is amazing!! I love the details and the dialog of the story!! well, all in all, I LOVE EVERYTHING :D
The book has really good potential! There's still room for improvement in the descriptions and also, there were a few minor grammatical errors but with editing, I think this book could really go a long way! Good first chapter! Keep it up! The plot is really interesting 👌👍👏
Gabby_NEW Gabby_NEW Apr 13
Guys, relax. Recognise is oftem used by the UK people. It's just like how they spell offense with "offence".
Gabby_NEW Gabby_NEW Apr 13
It looks like she's been interrogated by *ahem* a hot police boy XDD
AtticSalts AtticSalts May 01
Love the use of sensory details and wide variety of adjectives.
shikriti shikriti Mar 18
I wasn't voting because I was so busy reading it and then noticed i haven't even voted!! XD 
                              Btw, if you don't know already, this is a really good book and I'm really interested so far :D