A Book of Poems

A Book of Poems

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a kawaii daddy By daddysatan69 Updated Jan 21

This is the place my brain roams. The deranged and stranged place gets releases in word form. If you are disturbed by it, I understand. I am disturbed by it too.

__ShiningStars__ __ShiningStars__ Nov 04, 2016
*wipes away tears and blows nose*
                              
                              BEAUTIFUL!! BEAUTIFUL!! xD 
                              
                              ♥
Moeshake Moeshake Jan 01
It's deep for sure...perhaps influenced by music but easily put to music all the same. Its awesome 👏
Moeshake Moeshake Jan 01
I'm really good at deciphering poems and songs so this should be fun
JasmineFinch6 JasmineFinch6 Sep 20, 2016
This is quite good, and I like the message behind it. I can see that you've used vowel rhyme, but one word of advice is to use words that rhyme a bit more. I think it sounds nicer. But that's simply my opinion. Good work though
_Imperfect_Writing _Imperfect_Writing Oct 04, 2016
These are very deep and emotional but I know you must speak for others too. I hope you really don't think this way
LovelyRubyTop LovelyRubyTop Sep 30, 2016
Tyler Joseph could sing this, and it would be a hit, it would be incredible