The Light, The Fifth Sister

The Light, The Fifth Sister

575 Reads 6 Votes 6 Part Story
Catherine By cathyb1993 Updated Jan 03, 2011

There is to be a great war, the five elements must defeat the seven deadly sins. But what happens if the fifth and most crucial element can not make it? What if she is just not strong enough?

cathyb1993 cathyb1993 Jan 04, 2011
@failmuffin69 Thank you very much :D, it is going to be edited. Did you read any more of it? I apreciate the read x
failmuffin69 failmuffin69 Jan 04, 2011
Your writing is excellent, the main charecter is a little simple, but your style and the fact that I found only two grammer mistakes makes it close to perfection. Keep writing, your story is wonderful ; )
                              
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SafrinaGemmaSmith SafrinaGemmaSmith Jan 03, 2011
Catherine, this is awesome, But i'm not gonna read anymore till tomorrow. haha. :D
cathyb1993 cathyb1993 Dec 31, 2010
@emmyrb do you mean it would be better if they were shorter? I appreciate any structure advice because I don't really get which is best (: 
                              Thank you :D