There is to be a great war, the five elements must defeat the seven deadly sins. But what happens if the fifth and most crucial element can not make it? What if she is just not strong enough?
@failmuffin69 Thank you very much :D, it is going to be edited. Did you read any more of it? I apreciate the read x
Your writing is excellent, the main charecter is a little simple, but your style and the fact that I found only two grammer mistakes makes it close to perfection. Keep writing, your story is wonderful ; )
Catherine, this is awesome, But i'm not gonna read anymore till tomorrow. haha. :D
@emmyrb do you mean it would be better if they were shorter? I appreciate any structure advice because I don't really get which is best (:
Thank you :D